nice work. if you ever consider making a tune-sort-of, the line-endings have interesting swaraakshara patterns (which could suggest a leitmotif revolving around ni);)
I did think of it-- My initial idea was to compose a full fledged kriti for sarasvathi, but as I kept thinking about it, it became clear that it wasnt to my complete satisfaction, so I went this way.
Actually, one raga that came up as a strong candidate for the tune is "Gorakh Kalyan" because of its extremely peaceful and dreamy character.
But first, I want to know if its too small.. does it need more words??
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Nice and simple... very good to teach to children...
and... is the Virinchi-Vipanchi combination just a coincidence or ???
nothing can escape you-- can it?? No. its not a coincidence!
Those who like history generally like the term "nadi pravahini".
Am I right Vaidehi?
nice work. if you ever consider making a tune-sort-of, the line-endings have interesting swaraakshara patterns (which could suggest a leitmotif revolving around ni);)
(1)roopi(ni) - (swa)roopi(ni)-(ni) roopi(ni) __(ni-sa-ni-ni)
(2)kaami(ni) - (gaa)mi (ni) - yaami(ni)__(ni-ga-ni-ni)
(3)vaahi(ni)-pravaahi(ni)-(dhaa)ya(ni)__ (ni-ni-dha-ni)
I did think of it-- My initial idea was to compose a full fledged kriti for sarasvathi, but as I kept thinking about it, it became clear that it wasnt to my complete satisfaction, so I went this way.
Actually, one raga that came up as a strong candidate for the tune is "Gorakh Kalyan" because of its extremely peaceful and dreamy character.
But first, I want to know if its too small.. does it need more words??
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